Angel Gomez
Ms. Lehman
English1-1A
27 February 2020
How a friendship began
I had a soccer game in Twin Falls, against Aguila's. My team name was Real Jerome. When the game was about to begin, I didn’t know if we were going to win or not, so we got warmed up and ready to play. We Watched how the other team warmed up, and they looked okay, but I was still kind of nervous. Once I was on the field, it all went away because I focused more on what was happening in the soccer game. We got into our positions. Mine was a Mid Field. The goalkeeper was Angel C which I didn’t knew him at all. As the game continued, we kept on passing the ball around so our forwards could find an opening. The mid fielders will be centered it for them or gave long pass so they could score a goal. After they took a shot and the Angel C blocked it, the ball went out of the soccer field, and we got a corner kick. I went into the area where the ball was going to be kicked, and I got ready. I was getting ready to jump and move around, I was really nervous about it going to be blocked. Thier defenders got on me and started to use their bodies to block me from getting a header, and scoring. Once our player kicked the ball, we started to move around and get an opening. We could either header the ball or just kick it in. The ball was coming my way, but the opponent tried to header it out. It still came my way, so I kicked it in the soccer net and scored. We ended up winning the game 5-3, and we celebrated. Once we all got done celebrating, we left for home. Years passed by, and I moved from Jerome to Hazelton. I went the first day of school and once I walked into the class room Alex told Angel C
“Isn’t that the kid from soccer, that played for Jerome?”
Angel C came up to me asked me
“If I played for Jerome, and I said yes.”
Three years ago, we were rivals, and then we became friends. The problem when I first got here was that I was new, and I didn’t know anyone. Later on, I started to become friends with a lot of people. I started to talk with Jason and Edwin. A week from back then I started to get to know more people.
I didn’t know that that soccer game was going to ending us in a friendship.
I learned that you will never know what is going to come and go from that time.
Personal narative Reflection
1. Explain the procces you went through this paper. please be specific.
I thouggh about how good i was t soccer and so it reminded me when angel c team nd which he is now my friend
Their was some points where i just rushed to the point becuse i wasnt going to finish this essay.
2. What qualifies this paper as a narrative? What are the requirments for this genre and how did you meet them?
This qualifies as an narrative because i was the one who wrote this and it was something that happend to me in real life.
The requirments are Characters, Conflicts and plot events. The carachtar was wheni met Angel C and the event was when we had a soccer game and the plot was when i scored on him and 2 years after we becamed friends
3. What is one part of your story that you think turned out really well? What do you like about this part?
The part where it turned put realy well is when we had a croner kick and i scrored on Angel C. I like this part because i was so ready to make a goal and now days i remind his when i scored on him.
Ms. Lehman
English1-1A
27 February 2020
How a friendship began
I had a soccer game in Twin Falls, against Aguila's. My team name was Real Jerome. When the game was about to begin, I didn’t know if we were going to win or not, so we got warmed up and ready to play. We Watched how the other team warmed up, and they looked okay, but I was still kind of nervous. Once I was on the field, it all went away because I focused more on what was happening in the soccer game. We got into our positions. Mine was a Mid Field. The goalkeeper was Angel C which I didn’t knew him at all. As the game continued, we kept on passing the ball around so our forwards could find an opening. The mid fielders will be centered it for them or gave long pass so they could score a goal. After they took a shot and the Angel C blocked it, the ball went out of the soccer field, and we got a corner kick. I went into the area where the ball was going to be kicked, and I got ready. I was getting ready to jump and move around, I was really nervous about it going to be blocked. Thier defenders got on me and started to use their bodies to block me from getting a header, and scoring. Once our player kicked the ball, we started to move around and get an opening. We could either header the ball or just kick it in. The ball was coming my way, but the opponent tried to header it out. It still came my way, so I kicked it in the soccer net and scored. We ended up winning the game 5-3, and we celebrated. Once we all got done celebrating, we left for home. Years passed by, and I moved from Jerome to Hazelton. I went the first day of school and once I walked into the class room Alex told Angel C
“Isn’t that the kid from soccer, that played for Jerome?”
Angel C came up to me asked me
“If I played for Jerome, and I said yes.”
Three years ago, we were rivals, and then we became friends. The problem when I first got here was that I was new, and I didn’t know anyone. Later on, I started to become friends with a lot of people. I started to talk with Jason and Edwin. A week from back then I started to get to know more people.
I didn’t know that that soccer game was going to ending us in a friendship.
I learned that you will never know what is going to come and go from that time.
Personal narative Reflection
1. Explain the procces you went through this paper. please be specific.
I thouggh about how good i was t soccer and so it reminded me when angel c team nd which he is now my friend
Their was some points where i just rushed to the point becuse i wasnt going to finish this essay.
2. What qualifies this paper as a narrative? What are the requirments for this genre and how did you meet them?
This qualifies as an narrative because i was the one who wrote this and it was something that happend to me in real life.
The requirments are Characters, Conflicts and plot events. The carachtar was wheni met Angel C and the event was when we had a soccer game and the plot was when i scored on him and 2 years after we becamed friends
3. What is one part of your story that you think turned out really well? What do you like about this part?
The part where it turned put realy well is when we had a croner kick and i scrored on Angel C. I like this part because i was so ready to make a goal and now days i remind his when i scored on him.